我爱你时,你才闪耀,我不爱你时,你什么都不是!这么说对么?You were shining when I loved you ,but you are nothing when I didn't love you 这句话有错么?时态什么的```或者别的!要是想讲真的发生了呢```前后两句
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我爱你时,你才闪耀,我不爱你时,你什么都不是!这么说对么?You were shining when I loved you ,but you are nothing when I didn't love you 这句话有错么?时态什么的```或者别的!要是想讲真的发生了呢```前后两句
我爱你时,你才闪耀,我不爱你时,你什么都不是!这么说对么?
You were shining when I loved you ,but you are nothing when I didn't love you
这句话有错么?时态什么的```或者别的!
要是想讲真的发生了呢```前后两句都发生过了的话呢!
我爱你时,你才闪耀,我不爱你时,你什么都不是!这么说对么?You were shining when I loved you ,but you are nothing when I didn't love you 这句话有错么?时态什么的```或者别的!要是想讲真的发生了呢```前后两句
原句中有一个语法上 时态一致性的错误
后半句 but you are nothing when I didn't love you
的are 和 didn't 时态冲突
就算都发生了你也可以用一般现在时,因为这句对任何人在任何时候都应该算是普遍真理啊,而且 you are nothing for me这个事实是会一直存在,只要你不爱她了,You are nothing 这件事就会一直持续下去,所以后半句最好就用一般现在时
如果前半句还是想用过去时的话,就不要用逗号连接两个句子了,用句号隔开
When I loved you,you were shining as a star.But you are nothing now as I don't love you any more.
楼上那个You are shinny when I love you,but you are nothing when I don't.的 说法不错,但是有个致命错误.shinny..不表示闪耀,而是动词,表示爬上爬下
前面对,后面应该是but you will be nothing when i'm not loving you
You were shining when I loved you ,but you are nothing when I didn't love you !
都应该用现在时,因为表明某种情况下,而并不一定是真的发生了。
最简单轻松的说法
You are shinny when I love you, but you are nothing when I don't.
You were shining when I loved you ,but you are nothing when I don't.
前半句确定是完成时喽:)
后半句要用现代时就前后都用好了, 而且不要重复love了,很别扭~